1 comment for “Hunters Hunted 2 Intro Fiction

  1. Nerdo
    September 26, 2012 at 3:50 pm

    Nice piece of fiction! However, I’m not sure the narrator has actual ground to state:

    “If they can manipulate people like that, turn what people know on and off, no wonder they’ve remained hidden for so long.”

    I mean, he has no way to know how long they’ve been there, or at least he hasn’t told his friend how or why he knows. So I guess it could be more like:

    “If they can manipulate people like that, turn what people know on and off, I wonder how long they’ve remained hidden out there.”

    …Or else maybe a sentence or two could be added hinting that he also found additional evidence that, while sketchy, nevertheless pointed to those things being part of our world since “at least “.

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