The Introductory chapter for Children of the Revolution is up for review over at Google Docs or Google Drive or Google Donks or whatever it is right now. I’ve turned commenting on so you can leave a remark in-line as opposed to appended to the bottom of the text like you’d have to do here. Hop on over and take a peek, and see if it passes muster.
I’m working on some Hunters Hunted 2 drafts tonight before returning to the final two characters for Children of the Revolution. I’m also drafting a blog entry as a follow-up to Colm Olliver’s, explaining a little bit about how we developed him. Rich should have some art commentary, as well, so you get a sense of the book shaping up in graphic design as well as the content development portions.
Finally, we’re in the final three days of backing the deluxe print run of the Children of the Revolution book. If you’ve been holding out, now are your final few hours to pledge your copy. If you miss the window, we won’t have any left over (check out the round table for a discussion of how we use Kickstarter to fund precise print runs), so be sure you’re not left out in the cold! And by cold I mean, without a prestige print book.
read it now, but justin, we have some tremeres in the books right? no revolutionary warlock?!
grrrrrrr
I had no idea these google docs existed! I checked the blog post after the update on CotR and saw the Hunters Hunted 2 outline, so I contributed a few ideas if it’s not too late, although it probably is. Very much like the introduction for CotR, it’s informative and just the right amount of descriptive. Good stuff!
Looks great. However, under Clan Brujah: “no few of its members?” Is that grammatically correct? If so, disregard. : )